What I really like about this picture is that seeing the same person in two places looks kind of natural here. I think the different poses and the fact that your eyes are pointed in different directions are responsible for that.

I like the composition and the colors (those bright skin tones look great). The focus is very good, the contrast too, however I think that boosting the midtones a tad might have a positive impact. The poses and the facial expressions are really good.

All things considered, it's a very original and eye-catching shot. Congratulations and I hope to see more shots like that from you!